Technical Jargon? Not for Project Outcomes
At this point it is a pretty well-documented fact that I am a Star Trek fan. But even as a die-hard fan, I sometimes have to wonder what the writers were thinking. Take for example the TNG episode where Capt. Picard needs his artificial heart repaired. In the midst of the operation something goes horribly wrong, and the dialog goes something like this:
SURGEON: There's been some capillary reaction here. Let's proceed carefully. We'll need sharper focus on the thoracic polychromatics and verification of myocardial enzyme balance.
SURGEON: It's not working. Something's wrong. The metabolation occlusions aren't holding. Damn it! I can't stop the heterocyclic declination. Fuse.
SURGEON: Again! We need a biomolecular physiologist in here. This man is dying.
Talk about throwing a bunch of big words together. For all I know, it could have meant Picard had a killer case of hiccups. What we need here is some plain language that everyone can understand.
And that is exactly what we need in the Project Outcomes section of the Final and Interim Research Performance Progress Reports (F-RPPR and I-RPPR). As you are aware, with NIH’s implementation of the F-RPPR and I-RPPR, a new section, Section I – Outcomes, has been added. The Outcomes section will be made publicly available through the NIH RePORTER
website. The objective is to provide the public with easily understood results for NIH-funded biomedical research, thus improving the transparency about the use of federal funds.
NIH will only publish project outcomes after they’ve been reviewed and approved by NIH staff. If a project outcome is in biomedical expert-speak, shares proprietary information, or includes Personally Identifiable Information (PII), a grantee will be asked by NIH staff to submit revised project outcomes using the Additional Material functionality for the Final and Interim RPPR (i.e., Final Report Additional Materials (FRAM) for Final RPPR, IRAM for Interim RPPR). Grantees will respond to these requests using an enhanced web form that supports NIH’s ability to make this information public.
Submitting a revised outcomes statement is accomplished by using only the Project Outcomes section on the request for Additional Material web form. This text box is NOT for general comments or communication. And revised outcome statements will not be accepted if they are uploaded as an attachment. That functionality is reserved for other types of requested information.
For the latest Guide Notice on Project Outcomes, please see NOT-OD-18-103
As for the above dialog, I would suggest:
SURGEON: There's been some voltage drop here. Let's proceed carefully. We'll need to closely monitor the voltage / amperage balance.
SURGEON: It's not working. Something's wrong. The alligator clips aren't holding. Damn it! I can't stop the power drop!
SURGEON: We need an electrician in here. This man is dying.
Makes sense to me now.